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'Mum and My Rosy Cheeks' by Amy De'Ath
posted by schemer at 3:05 PM
This poem has some great moments. I am still being struck by the many successful images. The indifference towards the mother is bordering on absurd, it adds to the haunting feeling. This is my idea of good poetry
This is really good, Amy; I can see the images so clearly.Mind you, I could be biased, seeing as I'm the "Other Brother" referred to... I could be biased, but I'm not!
HelloThe poem is lovely... but I found you because my name is also Amy De'ath!Nice to share it with you.Best Wishes Amy :)amy@bigl.co.uk
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This poem has some great moments. I am still being struck by the many successful images. The indifference towards the mother is bordering on absurd, it adds to the haunting feeling. This is my idea of good poetry
This is really good, Amy; I can see the images so clearly.
Mind you, I could be biased, seeing as I'm the "Other Brother" referred to... I could be biased, but I'm not!
Hello
The poem is lovely... but I found you because my name is also Amy De'ath!
Nice to share it with you.
Best Wishes
Amy :)
amy@bigl.co.uk
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